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Planting Crops and Planning Manuscripts

6/3/2022

The photo is of potatoes that ended up on my table.

Writing is a lot like planning and planting a crop. You have to begin, and you have to see the story through until the end. Editing equals weeding. Nurturing the ideas is the same as getting the rain and sunshine. You can have a drought.

It may be a bit of a gamble—and include some knowledge—to get the garden grown and the potatoes ready to be stored for winter.

Before the first word is on the page, you can already taste the flavor of the story, imagine a bit of the characters. See the lushness. Imagine the harvest.

Then the endeavor truly starts. The first word is written, and the book begins. A lot of hours are in front of the author, just as a lot of effort is in front of the gardener.

For me, I usually give up on the garden. But I can't give up on my characters.

Photo credit: Liz Tyner
Garden credit: Definitely not Liz Tyner

A Marquess Too Rakish to Wed

5/7/2022

All the dimly lit chamber needed was a howling wind to pass through, fanning the fireplace and adding the scent of brimstone, but instead a rather pleasant aroma of shaving soap lingered in the air.
Guinevere and her father stepped nearer the physician who stood at the bedside, holding Reid’s wrist. He lowered the arm to the covers.
  ‘He has passed from this life.’
  ‘The accident took him.’ Her father spoke softly.
  ‘Sadly, no. The apothecary put the wrong powders in the bottle when he sent the pain mixture.’
  A stab of regret hit her. She put her closed knuckles over her lips. That moment, she wished she had danced just once with him.
Perhaps, if she’d known this was how she’d see him last, she might have been more forgiving.
‘Has his mother been informed?’ Guinevere’s father asked.
‘I was waiting until you and your wife arrived. Hours ago, I told the servants to expect the demise, and they have been preparing for it.’ The physician spoke to her father. ‘But now that you’re here, Your Grace, I’ll inform the Marchioness.’ He shuffled from the room.
‘The old Marquess was a decent man all his long life. Not…’ Her father nodded towards the bed. ‘Well, can’t speak ill of the dead, no matter how much it’s deserved. His father, my dearest friend, was so disappointed in him.’
Now that she stood so close to Reid, she could study his features, amazed at the strength which appeared in the simple planes and contours of his face.
In the past, she’d only seen him through a haze of dislike, but now she saw the true artistry.
Even in his final sleep, his jawline impressed her. Strong lips perfectly formed. Thick lashes complementing the hearty stubble. She’d never before been aware of so much masculinity in one person.
‘He needs a shave,’ she added, surprised.
'That stubble will get scorched off where he’s going.’
She glanced at her father, the truth of her words taking her by surprise. ‘Then he will likely be the handsomest man there.’
She turned back to Reid, wanting to lock his face in her memory.
Reid appeared so peaceful. Nothing like she would have expected. All his rakishness had faded, replaced with a bittersweet upturn of the lips she hadn’t noticed before.
She’d not known a man could smile in death,but leave it to Reid to do such a thing.
‘Soon after you were born—’ Her father stood at her side. ‘His father, may he rest in peace, thought you might make a bride for his son when the two of you reached an age to wed. But I knew—even then he was growing too strong-willed. Ignoring everyone who tried to correct him. I laughed off the Marquess’s words. It was obvious to me how he’d turn out, and his father was my best friend. I couldn’t be honest.’
Her father bowed his head. ‘The Marquess was such an upstanding man that after his son matured, he never mentioned it again.’
He moved to the drapes and pulled them closed. ‘I suppose this is for the best. Reid was too much like his…grandfather.’ He said the last word as an oath, which surprised her. ‘I didn’t know if your brother’s arm would heal after his tussle with Reid, but it did.’
‘I was happy their friendship ended. Reid was always up to some prank.’
Without realising what she was doing, she reached out to brush her fingers across his jaw, but halted, then rested a hand on his shoulder, giving a squeeze, impressed with the suggestion of strength emanating from the immobile form.
But it no longer mattered.
Even with all his boisterous friends, he was alone now. Grief saddened her. Someone must tell him goodbye. She bent to kiss his cheek.
His lashes fluttered.
She shrieked and was two steps away before she stopped.
‘I must have…—jostled him,’ she whispered, turning to her father.
‘Oh, Guinevere, I shouldn’t have brought you.’ He strode to her. ‘This is too much for your delicate spirit.’
She put her hand up to touch her father’s arm, and collected herself. ‘It’s only the tiredness of travel, and the shadows. And my imagination.’
Her father took her elbow. ‘Well, we’ve done our duty for tonight. Come along—’
‘Wait,’ she said, turning back. ‘It’s— I—’
She stepped over Reid again.
‘He looks so alive, I imagined…’ she whispered, shaking her head. ‘It is so regretful that he…’
‘Come along, Guinevere.’
‘Wait. I know we weren’t friends, but I—’ She struggled for the proper thing to say. ‘I wish we had been. That he would have been someone I might have liked.’
‘He would never be friends with a decent person like you. The heathen isn’t even worth a glance in death. His father was like a brother to me. Your mother and the Marchioness are closer than sisters. But Reid, the only son, was…disreputable. The world is a better place without him.’
‘I know he wasn’t perfect. In fact, I warned my friends from him. But he was a person, deserving of our sympathy.’
‘Sympathy. A person. The cleric is going to have to embellish on those words at the funeral, but likely he’ll ramble on a bit, and I’ll look sad, and his cousin and I can get on about our day. Reid leaves behind exemplary cattle, though.’
Guinevere touched her chin, imagining the potential that had been inside Reid. ‘Please let the cleric know about the horses so he will have something pleasant to say at the service.’
‘That pretty well sums up his life.’
She stared at Reid. ‘When we were children, he did help me across a stream once.’
‘That was gallant of him.’
‘He lifted me, his arm around my waist, and purposefully let my plaits drag the water. When he released me, I told him he would have made an excellent second son.’
‘I’m surprised you said such a thing.’
‘And then I told him I was giving him more praise than due. The third or fourth son would have been more suitable.’
She looked down again, but felt no guilt for the statement she’d made. She’d been irritated and he’d not appeared at all offended. Reid had laughed and said he would remember her words.
She looked at Reid. ‘An appealing form, and exemplary livestock. I suppose that was the total of his years.’
‘Gifts from his father.’ The Duke moved to the door. ‘He accomplished nothing on his own but revelry, and overbearing ways… Material things. Can’t think of anything else.’
Guinevere felt pulled to Reid, hating to leave him for the last time. Hating to see him so alone. ‘Well, I have to say something considerate before I leave. To wish him well.’
‘Have a go at it,’ her father said. ‘Just don’t lie.’
Guinevere brushed a hand across his knuckles. ‘Goodbye, Reid, Marquess of Hartcroft. May you use all the skills you gained in this life to give the devil a difficult time.’
Then his chest heaved in a breath. And a second one.
Her brain tried to catch up to her vision, and her mouth couldn’t remember how to speak.
‘Eh?’ her father said, brows furrowed. ‘What’s wrong, Guinevere?’
‘Alive.’ She pointed at him, fingers shaking. ‘Alive.’
Her father squinted.
She stepped closer, scrutinising Reid. ‘Can you hear me?’ she whispered.
Her father stopped so near, his side brushed hers. He gazed down, shaking his head. ‘Scoundrel to the very end.’ Examining Reid, he grumbled before saying, ‘Just a death twitch. Happens all the time. I’ve seen it before. Just one of the things we don’t understand about the dying.’ He shook his head. ‘This will just be one more story about how he’s a bother even in death. Lucifer is trying to return him.’ He took her shoulders. ‘Come along. We’ll leave the servants to their duties.’
Her voice came out in a whisper. ‘You must believe me.’
‘You’re overwrought. I am sincerely sorry to have allowed you here. I should have left you to give solace to his mother. It was unthinkable to bring you into this room.’
‘He might be alive.’
Her father paused, then peered at the visage again. ‘Guinevere. Look at him. He’s dead. The arrogant Marquess is dead. Long live the new Marquess.’
'If you’re certain.’ She put a hand to her temples. ‘I suppose I need spectacles. And the light is so dim.’
‘It’s for the best that he’s gone and his cousin will inherit the title. Reid was such a disgrace,’ the Duke continued. ‘I know his father would be upset to see this, but he was sad to see his son in life as well. The heir flew into a rage over something as simple as a spilled drink at breakfast.’
Her attention remained locked on the still form. She reached out, touching his cheek. He did feel a bit warm. Perhaps Lucifer was trying to expel him.
Then she called out, ‘Reid. Reid. I spilled your chocolate.’
‘That is not what he drank for breakfast, I assure you,’ her father asserted.
She pulled her hand to her chest, fingers curled. ‘I don’t know what happened to me. You’re right. He has passed on.’
She glanced at his face, peaceful in repose. Her imagination had flourished again.
Perhaps it would make her feel better if he had something sentimental of hers with him in the afterlife.
She clasped the brooch on her dress. The pearl jewellery her mother had given her. The one she’d sworn never to part with. She unpinned it from her garment and gave one lingering glance at it.
Her hand didn’t seem to want to release it. No, she would not part with it.
Then she reached down and jabbed the pin against his shoulder.
His eyes opened, flashing a blue squint at her as he muttered an audible curse.
Her father’s jaw dropped.
Fingers trembling, she tried to affix the pin to her dress, but it wouldn’t attach. She dropped it into the reticule hanging from her wrist. ‘Everyone’s going to be so…’ She looked into the eyes again. ‘Er…happy, to have him with us.’
He groaned, and his eyes closed.
‘Reid,’ she called.
His eyes didn’t open.
She slipped her hand to his jawline, against the stubble, and felt a slight heartbeat. She pressed her lips together, and clasped Reid’s hand. ‘You’re going to be fine.’
His fingers squeezed hers.
He was alive.
She whispered to her father, ‘Perhaps we should summon the staff to postpone the funeral. At least another day.’

Listening To Live Better

3/5/2022

Biographies always seemed like a guilty pleasure to me, but recently, I’ve decided there’s much more to them than vicariously looking into others’ lives.

The following are some takeaways from audio books I’ve listened to recently.

This Time Together, Laughter and Reflection by Carol Burnett:
Opera Singer Beverly Sills told her actress/comedian friend Carol Burnett that acting cheerful was a choice. And, it let me know that good cheer had little to do with happiness and a lot to do with attitude.

My Happy Days in Hollywood, A Memoir by Garry Marshall:
Diplomacy is key. Imagine being in charge, in an organization where one of the employees is to receive a $75,000 paycheck, and yet, she was not given it because the person in charge of signing checks refused to sign it. Now imagine, the payee is your sister, Penny Marshall, and the person with the pen is your father...and he wants your sister to apologize to your mother and he refuses to sign the check until she does.

Red by Sammy Hagar:
Some people attack life with a throttle full speed ahead and more energy than most. And uncensored might truly mean uncensored.

Blowing the Bloody Doors Off by Michael Caine:
It’s important to show up on time, be nice and know your lines. Then, when things go awry, you have much less to absorb and can react faster. A lot of life information was tucked into these pages.

Audio books are a great way to get in some extra reading time, and I'm glad I started listening...at least to the books.

Watch Out Behind the Butterfly

2/21/2022

Imagine a beautiful butterfly sitting on a leaf enjoying the day, but he needs to look behind him.

He really did need to look behind him, but he was sitting so innocently, I'm not sure he didn't know what was going on.

After the spider grabbed the wing, the butterfly shook him off and continued relaxing.

Photos from my life.

Beautiful Beastly Bison

12/26/2021

For six months, almost every time I needed a break from writing, I'd want to go look at the nearby wildlife, and sometimes it was the bison. Often—it was the bison.

Living in an area where the herds were once plentiful, and efforts have been made to replace them, it's not that difficult for me to search out the thousand-pound beasts. Or drive right though a bison pasture.

I was surprised at how often their faces are dirty from wallowing in the mud, but in the summer, I believe it's one of their favorite past-times. Almost like a person might spray on insect repellant, the animals roll in the mud when it's available.

I'm fortunate so many people in the area like to preserve the heritage. Or maybe they just like bison—because the feed bill in the wintertime has to be hefty.

Photos: My own collection

Tempting a Reformed Rake

12/5/2021

I often write characters that I don't want to see go away. Stubby was that character for me.

The joke at my house is that he was named after our former cat, Stubby Duke. The cat had a naturally bobbed tail and thought he was a duke.

So, I used the name Stubby for a character. When I was writing the little boy, I saw him as a youngster who thought he was just as big as all the sailors around him, and the sailors had started calling him by the nickname, and no one could remember his real name.

Years ago, after finishing the book A Captain and a Rogue, I wanted to write more of Stubby, so I wrote a short scene which began in my mind as...a man walking into a tavern and there's Stubby waiting on him. I had no clue what either would say.

I expected the child to be finding his father, but my story went in a different direction.

Then, I put the tidbit aside and finished the manuscript I was writing.

One day, I couldn't wait any longer. i needed to find out what happened to Stubby, and I did in Tempting a Reformed Rake.

Autumn Colors

10/9/2021

When most people talk of autumn colors, they are speaking of the leaves. But closer to the ground, you'll also find the fall hues such as the one on this coneflower the bug is enjoying.

Even some of the butterflies seem more suited to autumn colors.

The grasslands near the Prairie Dog Village at Wichita Wildlife Refuge seem cloaked for the season.

This bison enjoying his lunch of crisp, dried grass, is likely "Old Ned."

In the Oklahoma plains, where you won't always find a lot of leaves to change color, the evergreens help make the ground seem more colorful.

Autumn is so much more than foliage.

When Nature and Man Create A Haven

8/29/2021

What I found near Sulphur, Oklahoma, surprised me. The place is called Little Niagara. This recreation area has small manmade falls created in the early 1900’s, at a time when the government created the project to give a job to people struggling to survive.

In the area I found a sign explaining travertine rock. I grew up surrounded by it and it was just limestone rock… Limestone was actually quarried from nearby. The following picture of a limestone creek bed was taken in the wintertime at my parent's acreage.

It was as if I were almost walking back into the outdoors of my past. Granted, the place wasn’t deserted on a low traffic day, but still, it gave me the serenity, the poison ivy and cooling water that I’d grown up taking for granted…almost.
I grew up near a place called Sulphur Hollow. Or “Sulpher Haller”. My dad took me to the mineral spring once. A small spring in the middle of the forest that had the rotten egg scented water seeping from it.

This protected land gave me a contented feeling.

When I returned from visiting The Chickasaw Recreation Area, a surprising side effect struck me that I never expected. Even though traces of my childhood accent have never truly left my speech, for a few days the accent returned as if I were back in my childhood home.

Not Everyone Is Allergic to Pollen

8/21/2021

Allergens are a real headache. But thankfully we have pollinators who do the job of transferring those little bits of irritation for us.

I'd never thought much about it until I saw the pollen attached to the bees.

But never approach a pollinator with anything but caution. They can be a bit irritable...almost as if they have allergies.

The Little Chapel Made With Love

8/7/2021

I really wasn't expecting to find a church in the middle of a wildlife area, but I did. Apparently, it's been there about a hundred years, but I didn't have a clue.

I'll never visit the Sistine Chapel, but I have this little chapel nearby. It's an example of someone taking the skills they had and using them.

Not every artist's work turns up in guidebooks, but using what we have can have as much significance to the people nearby as Michelangelo's art has to the people who view it.